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[redfiona99]

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'Baci Nel Passato' or 'Kisses in the Past'. Part two of the series 'I Baci di amore e l'odio'

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[frala.livejournal.com]

Thanks to Elizabeth for invaluable help with Italian and to Frala, Missy and Mynx for other help.
- I have no idea how I helped you but you are welcome ;)

No shit, every guy on his books had ties to one Family or another.
- I love how corrupt this is and everyone knows but its still there, kinda liek it really is lol

Backlund had been with them for ages, he was trustworthy -
- ahhh *g* now I see :)

He had got the important detail though, they were family.
- *nods* even if it si all fucked up

“What’s all this I hear about the new lawyer being a Murph, don’t we got enough of our own.”
- love that, well not love it as a statement but love it in the spectrum of the story :)

The guy was good looking too.
- just a lot

or the first day at school when you decide who you like and who will be your enemy for the next however many years you can hack it.
- *grin* I love you I hate you I want to fuck you

O’Haire produced both a wine bottle and a six pack of Miller’s.
- *g*

O’Haire kissed down the side of Chuck’s neck, small kisses, light as butterflies, all expertly placed. “You know, if we’re going to keep doing this, you’re going to have to call me Sean.”
- ohhsoyummy

This was going to be a long game and they hadn’t reached the end of the first innings yet.
- *hoppity* I sooo cant wait!!!! I really like this!!

[creepy-girl80.livejournal.com]

*chuckles* you're welcome for the support, RF :-)

Missy

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[redfiona99.livejournal.com]

>>- I have no idea how I helped you but you are welcome ;)<<
Identifying Bob Backlund from my rather odd and vague discription.

>>- I love how corrupt this is and everyone knows but its still there, kinda liek it really is lol<<

LOL sadly it really is like that. And I supposedly come from a nice part of town :)

>>love that, well not love it as a statement but love it in the spectrum of the story :)<<

Breathes sigh of relief. I was very worried about that line, because I was think that there would be tonnes of complaints but (touches wood) no one's complained yet. I think you're the only person who's even mentioned it. Which is either good or bad ;)

>>The guy was good looking too.
- just a lot<<

LOL no kidding. And seeing as how I've just seen SD Chuck isn't too bad looking himself.

>>or the first day at school when you decide who you like and who will be your enemy for the next however many years you can hack it.
- *grin* I love you I hate you I want to fuck you<<

Actually in my case I still hate the boys that I hated on the first day of school (who are all threatening to go to same Uni as me!) but for Chuck, yes.

>>This was going to be a long game and they hadn’t reached the end of the first innings yet.
- *hoppity* I sooo cant wait!!!! I really like this!!<<

Glad you liked it so much. And sorry about the slightly prolonged delay, which may extend slightly further than planned.

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[frala.livejournal.com]

Breathes sigh of relief. I was very worried about that line, because I was think that there would be tonnes of complaints but (touches wood) no one's complained yet. I think you're the only person who's even mentioned it. Which is either good or bad ;)

i think that its good it added another touch of realism cause lets face it the tye of guys you are writing about arent exactly known for being pc :) and you are very welcome for the feedback