You are a brilliant woman. I loved how you wrote a one-night stand between two self-involved people without making anyone skeesy or mean, just a refreshing burst of 'I like what I like, and if you don't wanna do it there are plenty of others who will." Randy's sarcastic little asides, the ending in particular, totally matched that vibe. I'm jealous how seamlessly you moved from present to a non-particular past with Randy's musings. Good flow with that.
All the mirror details shone. Especially the steamed up lines, but the beginning part about being able to see her front and back at once. It made for visuals I could enjoy too :)
I don't know how bra sizes are measured in the UK. Here in the states, the 36 is actually the chest measurement (in inches, around the body), and doesn't have much to do with boob size, so the sentence with the 36 DDs sounded a little off. I think just removing the the 36 part would correct that. Unless of course you meant for Randy to not know that. Most guys don't and often dream of girls with 56 QQs until it's pointed out that a 56 inch torso would put her at about 350 pounds.
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Date: 2008-10-08 10:28 pm (UTC)All the mirror details shone. Especially the steamed up lines, but the beginning part about being able to see her front and back at once. It made for visuals I could enjoy too :)
I don't know how bra sizes are measured in the UK. Here in the states, the 36 is actually the chest measurement (in inches, around the body), and doesn't have much to do with boob size, so the sentence with the 36 DDs sounded a little off. I think just removing the the 36 part would correct that. Unless of course you meant for Randy to not know that. Most guys don't and often dream of girls with 56 QQs until it's pointed out that a 56 inch torso would put her at about 350 pounds.