I love how intertwined everyone is. They're like a drama Jenga, and sooner or later someone is going to pull the wrong piece.
Another thing I really liked is how you described Kelly's taste in sex. It was a little snarky and demeaning because it's coming from Randy, but at the same time, it was presented as just something she liked, which is rare to read for women-- there always has to be a reason, and while that can be compelling, it's also very refreshing to read about the pants wanting what the pants want.
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Another thing I really liked is how you described Kelly's taste in sex. It was a little snarky and demeaning because it's coming from Randy, but at the same time, it was presented as just something she liked, which is rare to read for women-- there always has to be a reason, and while that can be compelling, it's also very refreshing to read about the pants wanting what the pants want.