Orgasms never came as a surprise to Randy, and he thought anyone that they did surprise was a moron, why else were they having sex, but this one was remarkably unsurprising. It seemed to well up slowly, like swimming in honey, and it didn't come to a crashing wave, it just hung there like a stunt biker.
You are amazing. You know that, right? Super duper amazing. Everything, EVERYTHING, about that passage is exquisite. The first sentence is long, multi-claused, and crammed with ideas and attitude. It's complicated, but clear, a lost-in-thought moment that propels the story, snarky but unmean, natural but surprising. It's genius! And the next sentence, my God, Red, the next sentence is gorgeous. swimming honey, and possibly the simile of the year: hung there like a stunt biker. Man, that's divine. That rush, the activity, the feeling that there's hangtime when really there's just a few amazing seconds. Wow. Wow. Wow.
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You are amazing. You know that, right? Super duper amazing. Everything, EVERYTHING, about that passage is exquisite. The first sentence is long, multi-claused, and crammed with ideas and attitude. It's complicated, but clear, a lost-in-thought moment that propels the story, snarky but unmean, natural but surprising. It's genius! And the next sentence, my God, Red, the next sentence is gorgeous. swimming honey, and possibly the simile of the year: hung there like a stunt biker. Man, that's divine. That rush, the activity, the feeling that there's hangtime when really there's just a few amazing seconds. Wow. Wow. Wow.